Good job so far
Great job so far but i think there is still room for improvement. your timing is out and the sound quality isnt so great but i think it was a very creditable effort. with a little bit more time and effort i think that could be really really good. try putting a few note in the left hand to give it a bit more depth.
Try playing along to a metranome or to the actuall music.
REALLY good effort tho!! Keep it up