This is an incredible piece of music. It really touches me in so many ways. This is possibly one of the most emotional pieces of music i have ever heard. I think this song is something people can sit and reflect to.....think about everything they have done in their lives and i think it inspires them....inspires them to make the most of the time they have left, to squeeze every ounce of joy out of life.
I think this has alot of potential to become a large orchestral piece, i think putting more emphasis on strings....maybe having them play in harmony with the melody. I also think that this is one of the few pieces that would benefit from getting louder and more robust as if you literally pouring your heart and sould into it. I think you should make this into a very big and very powerful piece maybe finishing off quietly and softly like it started. Anyway..Good Luck with this piece i can wait to hear the full product.